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Re: Out of this World
Hey, IamArt! This is a fun song! It kind of reminds me of the kind that Taylor Swift would sing, actually. If that's not a compliment for you, then I ...
Oct 27, 2009 -
Re: Just Like
I don't know much about writing songs, but I do rather like your imagery. I like songs that put pictures in my head. I also agree-- Just fall into a ...
Sep 17, 2009 -
Re: The Elements: Secrets of the River (Prologue)
Helloo! First of all, I've just got to say that you've got a captivating voice, especially as the story flows on. Your descriptions are well written, I think, although I ...
Sep 17, 2009 -
Re: A Harry Potter Parody
I have always considered myself to be a die hard Harry Potter fan. But now? I'm a die hard Henry Putter fan. This was amazing! I love the way you ...
Sep 15, 2009 -
Re: The Experiment - Chap. 10
Holy crum! She just up and killed the guy! What was she thinking? Now people will consider her a threat! :shock: Anyway. That was pretty dang intense, I have to ...
Jul 13, 2009 -
Re: The Experiment - Chap. 9
Hello again, Well done again! I'm feeling kind of stupid because I want to write a good review but I have nothing to critique you on. I can compliment you, ...
Jul 11, 2009 -
Re: Because - Chap. 29
Hey, KJ! After I read both of your new chapters, there was only one thought going through my head: "Ahhhh!" Thanks. Now I have to read it again so I ...
Jul 11, 2009 -
Re: Deleted
Fascinating! Absolutely fascinating! How do you come up with this stuff? The dialogue was clever, the imagery powerful, and the thoughts well organized. You're just amazing all around! I'm sorry ...
Jul 5, 2009 -
Re: On a Day Like Today - 1.1
Hey, KJ! What a powerful piece! There was only one thing I had a problem with: Even when I was little, Mom told me I would vanish for hours at ...
Jul 4, 2009 -
Re: The Experiment - Chap. 8
Hey there, KJ! I admit, I admire the way you have made Wren someone we don't particularly like. You could have made her the hero type, but that would have ...
Jun 28, 2009 -
Re: The Experiment - Chap. 7
Woot! *does a dance* He didn’t wait for an answer, though I was sure were already on live television, You probably need a "we" before the "were" I didn’t look ...
Jun 26, 2009 -
Re: The Experiment - Chap. 6
Ha! Called it! Okay, so I have no proof that I knew Wren was going to be in an Experiment, but oh well. I'm so excited! I've been hoping to ...
Jun 24, 2009 -
Re: The Experiment - Chap. 4
KJ, you're amazing. I think you could write about anything and I'd just gobble it all up. You've got power in your words, girl, and you know how to use ...
Jun 23, 2009 -
Re: Unveiled Truth (temporary title)
Hey there, Worx! What a great chapter! Your descriptions and imagery in this portion of the story are amazing! You have a style all your own. Your voice comes through ...
Jun 9, 2009 -
Re: Unveiled Truth (temporary title)
Hellooo! I'm so excited about this new story! I can tell it's going to be great! The sweltering heat never let up in this desert, but I still loved it. ...
May 13, 2009
